A heart that sells a state: non-defining relative clauses for extra information
About this lesson
This B1 ESL lesson plan teaches non-defining relative clauses, the extra information between commas, through the story of the I ♥ NY logo and its sketch in a taxi.
- Grammar
- Who, which, where and whose after a comma (Milton Glaser, who sketched it in a taxi, was a graphic designer.), never that, with the pronoun always kept.
- Topic
- How a quick sketch became the logo of a New York State tourism campaign, with words such as logo, symbol, campaign and typewriter.
- Activities
- Episode notes to read, a logo drawn on a diner napkin and a listener's message to hear, self-checking drills, a design-team chat and a logo description to order.
What's inside
Chapter 1Warm-up: logos everywhere!
Chapter 2Let's read: a heart in a taxi
Chapter 3Let's listen: a logo on a napkin
Chapter 4Grammar: Glaser, who sketched it in a taxi, …
- Study the scheme: extra information with commasGrammar schemeTry it
- Choose the correct optionChoose the optionUnlock
- Fill in the gaps with relative pronounsFill in the gapsTry it
- Fill in the table: join the two sentencesFill in the tableUnlock
- Choose the correct answer: which sentence is correct?QuizUnlock
Chapter 5Let's talk: pick a logo!
Chapter 6Homework
- Match the words and the meaningsMatchUnlock
- Unscramble the wordsAnagramUnlock
- Fill in the gaps with the lesson's wordsFill in the gapsUnlock
- Find the matching pairs: words and meaningsMemory gameUnlock
- Choose the correct option: new sentencesChoose the optionUnlock
- Fill in the gaps: new sentences with relative pronounsFill in the gapsUnlock
- Put the words in the correct orderUnjumbleUnlock
- Choose the correct answer: join the two sentencesQuizUnlock
- Drag the words into the gaps: the hosts' answer to WinstonDrag and dropUnlock
- Choose the correct option: Yesenia's design blogChoose the optionUnlock
Vocabulary
12 words and phrases from the lesson, each with a picture and audio in edio.
+9 more with pictures and audio in the lessonMore words
- logo
- symbol
- designer
- campaign
- typewriter
- mug
- oval
- collection
- ink
Grammar: non-defining relative clauses
A non-defining relative clause adds extra information about someone or something we already know: Milton Glaser, who sketched it in a taxi, was a graphic designer. With the story of a famous logo, learners pick who, which, where or whose after the comma, never use that, and keep the pronoun in every clause.
Milton Glaser, who sketched it in a taxi, …
A non-defining relative clause adds extra information about someone or something we already know. It goes between commas, or after a comma at the end of the sentence.
Who, which, where and whose
Who is for people, which for things and animals, where for places, and whose stands for his, her, its or their + noun. A pet with a name takes who: Footnote, who sleeps on the mixing desk, is in the show's new logo.
Who, which, where, whose
| For | Use | Example |
|---|---|---|
| people | who | Milton Glaser, who was born in the Bronx, designed the logo. |
| things (and animals) | which | The sketch, which MoMA owns, is smaller than a postcard. |
| places: in / at that place | where | The Bronx, where Glaser was born, is part of New York City. |
| his / her / its / their + noun | whose | Glaser, whose first idea was two ovals, tried again. |
In the taxi and at the diner
- Milton Glaser, who was born in 1929, studied at Cooper Union.
- The logo, which you can see on T-shirts everywhere, has three letters and a heart.
- Darius, whose drawing looked like a potato, laughed.
- Kansas City, where the show's studio is, is in Missouri.
- Footnote, who sleeps on the mixing desk, is in the show's new logo. (a pet with a name: who)
- Riley chose a suitcase, which says travel without any words.
Where the commas go
The clause comes right after the noun it describes, with a comma on each side of it: The logo, which has a red heart, was first used in 1977. At the end of a sentence, one comma is enough: The logo's typeface is American Typewriter, which has rounded letters.
noun, who / which / where / whose + extra information ,the rest of the sentence
The logo, which has a red heart, was first used in 1977.
The logo's typeface is American Typewriter, which has rounded letters.
Which one? Or extra information?
With no commas, the clause tells us which one: The designer who made I ♥ NY was Milton Glaser. With commas, it only adds a fact, so names and one-only things, such as Milton Glaser, MoMA or my mom, take commas. That fits only the first kind.
Which one? No commas
- The designer who made I ♥ NY was Milton Glaser.
- Without the clause, we don't know which designer.
- that is fine here: the designer that made it.
Extra information: commas
- Milton Glaser, who made I ♥ NY, was born in 1929.
- Without the clause, we still know who it is.
- Never that here.
Never that, never left out, never said twice
After the comma, use who or which, never that, and don't drop the pronoun: The sketch, which MoMA owns, is tiny. Don't repeat the person, thing or place: not which it is, who he sketched or where he studied there. And whose is not who's.
Never that, never leave it out
After the comma, use who or which, never that: Glaser, who sketched it… (not: Glaser, that sketched it…). Never leave out the pronoun: The sketch, which MoMA owns, is tiny (not: The sketch, MoMA owns, is tiny). With names and one-only things (Milton Glaser, MoMA, my mom), the clause is always extra information: use commas.
Don't say it twice
who and which take the place of he, she, it or them, so don't add them again: New York, which is a big state… (not: which it is). Glaser, who sketched it… (not: who he sketched). The sketch, which MoMA owns… (not: which MoMA owns it). where already means “there”: Cooper Union, where he studied… (not: where he studied there). whose is not who's (= who is).
Common mistakes
Milton Glaser, that sketched it in a taxi, was a designer.
Milton Glaser, who sketched it in a taxi, was a designer.
after a comma: who or which, never that
New York, which it is a big state, wanted more visitors.
New York, which is a big state, wanted more visitors.
which is the subject: no extra it
The logo, who has a red heart, is famous.
The logo, which has a red heart, is famous.
things: which
Glaser, who he sketched the idea, did the job for free.
Glaser, who sketched the idea, did the job for free.
who is the subject: no extra he
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What's in the lesson
- 18 auto-checked exercises
- 5 games
- 1 article
- 1 grammar scheme
- 1 set of word cards
- 2 audio clips
- 2 pictures
- 2 transcripts
The main objectives of this lesson are to:
- add extra information between commas: The sketch, which MoMA owns, is smaller than a postcard.
- choose who, which, where or whose after a comma, never that: Cooper Union, where Glaser studied, is a college in New York.
- tell extra information from a clause that says which one: the designer who made I ♥ NY against Milton Glaser, who made I ♥ NY,
- keep one subject in each clause: New York, which is a big state, not which it is
Lesson 22 is the second lesson of Art and design, unit 6 of English B1.2 · Changemakers. Lesson 21 added whose to the defining clauses of A2.2 lessons 25 and 26; now these words follow a comma. Lesson 23 shows when the pronoun can be left out. A famous logo's story is full of names and one-of-a-kind things, so its facts arrive as extra information: Milton Glaser, who…, the sketch, which…
Students spin a wheel of questions about T-shirts, logos and New York, then learn twelve words, from sketch and imitate to typewriter and ink, with pictures and audio. They read the episode notes on how Glaser's sketch became I ♥ NY, then hear Riley and Darius design a logo on a diner napkin and Winston from New York describe the logo on his grandfather's bike shop; both are AI-voiced. The grammar chapter has the scheme and four drills that mark themselves, including a table that joins two sentences with commas. In the speaking chapter, students pick a festival logo with Yesenia, put her logo description in order and open boxes about designs.
All ten homework tasks check themselves: a word match, an anagram, gaps with the design words and a memory game, then relative pronouns to choose and to type in new sentences, word order with the commas inside the chunks, a quiz that joins two sentences, the hosts' answer to Winston with words to drag in, and Yesenia's design blog with forms to choose.
- Grammar:
- non-defining relative clauses · who, which, where, whose · commas · relative clauses
- Topic:
- I ♥ NY · Milton Glaser · New York · logos · graphic design · MoMA · art and design · Stories That Travel
Teaching tips
- Start with names students know: a city, a team, a teacher. Each student adds one fact between commas, as in Chicago, which is a huge city, …, and a partner finishes the sentence.
- Before the notes, draw a heart on the board and ask what it means and where students see it. Then read how one heart took the place of the word “love” in a famous logo.
- Play the napkin dialogue twice: first for each logo idea, then for the relative clauses. Students write down the extra information: which is our most important tool, who sleeps on the mixing desk.
- Read the scheme's examples aloud with a short pause at each comma, then cover the clause and ask whether the sentence still tells us who or what it means. If it does, the commas stay.
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